PART 2 — The Fever
PART 2 — The Fever
Valerie's voice was barely above a whisper.
"I tried to do everything, Daddy."
Her words hit me harder than any mission I'd ever faced.
I looked down at my daughter. She was shivering even though her skin felt burning hot. Mateo had finally stopped crying, resting quietly against my shoulder as I gently rocked him.
"You're done cleaning," I said softly. "You're not doing another chore today."
Her frightened eyes widened.
"But... Claire said—"
"I don't care what Claire said."
For the first time since I'd walked through the door, Valerie looked confused instead of scared.
I carried both children into the living room. Rex stayed close to Valerie's side, never taking his eyes off her. He rested his head against her leg, and for the first time all day, she allowed herself to lean against someone.
I grabbed the thermometer from the medicine cabinet.
103.2 degrees.
My stomach tightened.
She shouldn't have been standing.
She shouldn't have been carrying a baby.
She shouldn't have been scrubbing floors.
I wrapped her in a blanket while I prepared a bottle for Mateo. The poor little guy drank desperately, finishing nearly the entire bottle without stopping.
"When was the last time he ate?" I asked.
Valerie thought for a moment.
"I don't know... maybe after breakfast."
I looked at the clock.
It was nearly five in the afternoon.
A six-month-old baby shouldn't go that many hours without feeding.
I forced myself to stay calm.
None of this was Valerie's fault.
She was only seven.
I called our pediatrician's emergency line.
After describing Valerie's fever, exhaustion, and the bruises I'd found, the nurse urged me to bring both children to the clinic immediately.
"I'll be there in twenty minutes," I replied.
Before leaving, I walked back into the kitchen.
The spilled milk was still on the floor.
Half-washed dishes filled the sink.
A bucket of dirty water sat beside the cabinets.
A tiny plastic step stool had been dragged to the counter so Valerie could reach the sink.
My daughter had been standing there for hours.
Alone.
I slowly looked around the room.
Everything suddenly felt... staged.
The broom leaned neatly against the refrigerator.
A list was taped to the cabinet door.
My eyes locked onto it.
Today's Chores
Feed Mateo
Wash bottles
Clean kitchen
Sweep downstairs
Fold laundry
Wash diapers
No TV
No snacks until everything is finished
At the bottom was a handwritten note.
If Daddy asks, tell him everything is fine.
My heart sank.
I carefully removed the paper and folded it into my wallet.
Then I noticed something else.
Above the refrigerator.
The small security camera.
I'd installed four cameras around the house after a string of break-ins in the neighborhood two years earlier. They covered the front door, backyard, living room, and kitchen.
Claire had complained about them for months.
Said they made her feel like someone was always watching.
I suddenly understood why.
Without saying a word, I unplugged the kitchen camera's backup memory card and slipped it into my pocket.
If there was an explanation, it would be there.
If there wasn't...
Then I'd finally know the truth.
The pediatric clinic was unusually quiet.
Dr. Harris examined Valerie first.
He checked her fever, listened to her breathing, and gently pressed along her shoulders and back.
Valerie flinched.
"When did this start hurting?" he asked kindly.
She hesitated.
"I... I carry Mateo a lot."
"How often?"
She looked at me before answering.
"Almost every day."
The room fell silent.
Dr. Harris met my eyes.
His expression changed instantly.
Professional.
Concerned.
He asked me to step into the hallway for a private conversation.
"I can't make conclusions based on one visit," he said carefully, "but your daughter appears severely exhausted. She's dehydrated, running a high fever, and she's carrying far more physical responsibility than a child her age should."
He paused.
"The bruises are consistent with repeated strain. She needs rest."
I nodded slowly.
"And Mateo?"
"He seems hungry but otherwise stable. Keep feeding him regularly tonight."
As we left the clinic, Valerie reached for my hand.
"Daddy?"
"Yeah, sweetheart?"
"Are you mad at me?"
I stopped walking.
Knelt in front of her.
And gently brushed the hair away from her face.
"I could never be mad at you."
A tear rolled down her cheek.
"I tried really hard."
"I know."
She threw her arms around my neck and sobbed for the first time since I'd arrived home.
I held her until she finally stopped shaking.
Then I looked toward the darkening sky.
Claire still hadn't called.
Still hadn't texted.
But the memory card sitting in my jacket pocket suddenly felt heavier than anything I'd ever carried.
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Somewhere inside that footage...
The truth was waiting.
